Hi

Firstly, as a proud owner of the first book I’d like to say I’m very much looking forward to this second volume.
@Eidan
marczwan’s message may seem harsh (that’s online communication for you) but it’s not without merit.
I have to agree that the proportions of the presented head sculpt are somewhat off. The cranial part is too small compared to the facial part.
To put it in other words: in terms of idealized proportions the eyes are too high making the face too tall and the forehead too short. It is emphasized by a very strong jaw (large jaweline and very tall chin). This leaves the cranial part too small (too short and too narrow).
I took the liberty to browse through your sketchbook Eidan and I have to say your other works seem much better proportioned. (apart from maybe the sketch skull on page 2, but it’s clearly a work in progress)
One of the other images you posted - the one with two skulls - shows a bit of the problem:

As you can clearly see the orbits of the block-out are too high making the face too big.
From looking at the image with the head sculpt overlaying the skull it also seems to me (but please take this with a pinch of salt as I’m no expert like Uldis) that the eyeballs are placed a tiny bit too high in the orbits which further emphasizes the distortion.
As for the camera in zbrush I’m not exactly sure what you mean. You have perspective view turned off. If anything the orthographic view should only make the cranium seem bigger (sometimes it might seem too big as compared to photos or real life observations) which is definitely not the case.
Lastly calling marczwan out for his empty gallery seems a bit uncalled for. For all you know he might be a master sculptor… 
I have high hopes for this book (as I’m sure many others as well) so I’m hoping you won’t mind this critique.
peace
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