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no replys hmmm…
wel…i completed the concept guy i was taliking bout…
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Nice concept.
I would take a look at some more anatomy refferences. Theres some attention needed around the rib cage, looks like he has a extra set of abbs. Give him some arm pits, and make a clearer definition, where they are coming from and going to.
Make a bit of definition where the upper pecs strap across the upper chest. Need to develop the scapular. Some times your find yor get little, or no replys when there is too much to crit on. Going back to the basics where a hint of correct anatomy is better that too much inaccurate definitionis.
I think you have come along well, and if you want to sky rocket into better progression, you may want to study muscle anatomy a bit more. Keep up the good work and keep enjoying it.
I have got little to no replys from my past works, in some cases I can see why, it just would have been more constructive to hear something than nothing.
keep it up man it takes a lot of time to study the face itself. i am like you jumping into the world before i understand a pebble. But you seem to be going in the right direction thanx to the helpful guys in the forum. so i am watching this thread closely . am still at drawing the face planes a zillion times part 
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But keep at it :_).
As a wise man once said conquer yourself before you conquer the world.
Lol i guess he was an artist and talking about anatomy. k time for me to get back to drawing the face a zillion times. Will come and give u a pat in the back once in a while.
ok so this is for the halloween contest…
pls check ot out and let me know…
I agree that your work is good. But there needs to be more reference studying for the front of the torso. The guy with the flaming head really has some issues with his abs. It looks like you have over emphasized the ribs a bit.
You’re latest work is very stylized, I like that you are doing very different things. My only crit with your latest is the size of the head, seems a little small.
thanks bauervision…i realy appreciate that u stoped by check out the thread…its difficult for noobs like us to get crits…
th abs of the flaming guy was exagerated deliberately by me…i knwo it was stupid but again passion overtook me…
the new guy i m making is a teen vampire…and i wanted it catoony look…if not nything atleast the anatomy thas why the head is lil small…pls check ut for updates…i have balanced the head with his feet…
if it doesnt work out then we can scale it…
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Join http://www.3d.sk/ your not regret it. Perchase Human Anatomy for Artists: The Elements of Form, highly recomended.
Get both of Zac Petroc DVDs, then your have all you need. Draw, do lots of drawing, this realy helps reform your style and anatomy.
I havent posted any images rencently as iv been heavly using all the above. Keep it up.
hey tez ,thanks mate…i have already checkd it…but still thnx a lot…
ok so an update on teh halloween model…hair and all the accessories r left…
hmahahahahha!!!
and the body just a study…
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Hey man you’re honestly getting better I’m glad for you!
The anatomy on the last guys is a great improvement from what you had before on other models!
Keep going!!
Yes looking much better. Im liking the stretched skin on the blue character.
Much better, I especially like the back muscles on your vampire dude.
Sure u’r improving much better than me
I think u should take a look for the proportion 1st for the blue one…
Even if it’s a taller figure, u need to maintain its proportion, use the head as a standard of measurement, unless u’r planning to have it super deformed, I know it sounds old school as I’m having trouble also sometimes.
Feel free exploring the internet and searching for anatomical books…
The torso is better, the muscles are well defined, keep up the good works…
bauer,tez,night,and darukin…its bcoz of u guys i m geting better thnx a lot
wel…an update on the hallowenn character…
i wanted to go for a stylized chec
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That looks great.
I really like that there is a feeling with this guy. He seems interesting, but at the same time you don’t trust him.
Keep it up!
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Perhaps if the child was larger it would get the idea across more.
No, I think the kid in the bag is fine, it adds an air of mystery.
To me it is his eyes.
They seem very large, almost comical.
Really distracts from the theme of the image in my humble opinion.
I would maybe even get rid of the horns, they stand out too much and don’t really fit with the sinister appeal his has going on. Maybe shorten them?
I know it is probably a bit late in scheme of things but I think that if he was looking over his left shoulder down the sidewalk that would also give alot more power to the image.
Likeas if he is checking to make sure no one is watching or following him.
thnx bauer…i have to accept that the eye was stupid…but just made the theme for my imaje…
i guess i m tired with it…and done with ut
it stupid…but if this picture conveys the mesg to u alll…than i m haappy…
pls check it out!!!
I really liked your last sculpt! Don’t forget to create a post in the Halloween Challenge 2008 forum!