Alon peled sketchbook Thread

[unhaimlish]

Hi everyone
this is my first sketchbook Thread ever and i hope to learn a lot from your comments…
my first model is the scubadiver(wip) still need a lot of work 2 do…

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add some texture
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my work
http://www.slide.com/r/zcvfLJOl5j-W6HfNLpIVlslAWt7REh98?fbr=1

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[rattus]

i like it.
maby the neopren should be even tighter,
especially around his jaws and chin.

[unhaimlish]

rattus:thank u for your comment and i think that u r right about the neoprene and im gonna fix it as soon as possible

this is my new model “the pantomimist” that i made for anatomy practice.
i know i have some problem with his fingers that need 2 be fix
and to be honest i always have the same prob when i get to sculpt the fingers, i just have no idea how to approach this thing

hope u like it and of course C&C Are welcome

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[womball]

He looks pretty good overall. His nose looks too wide though (specifically for the clown) its as big as his mouth. Also you use this head a bit too much in your portfolio, it would be nice to see different ones. Watch the helix of the ear, its off where it connects to the head.

For fingers think of them as segments 4 fingers are almost exactly the same except tips for a round off shape. The thumb has 2 visible joints, the bottom one connecting to the overall hand. Its composed of 3 joints, where is the other 4 fingers have 3 joints. You might want to try doing a study where you work from the bones up to muscles and skin.

[unhaimlish]

womball- thanks man for your reply and for the help on the finger prob i have…
and you r definitely right about me using 2 much of the same head in my portfolio
so i’ll start a new one this week i hope…

and a new sketch for my anatomy studying. still searching and exploring for the overall idea but i hope to get there soon.

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[sculptor.zb]

Nice!!

[unhaimlish]

sculptor.zb- thank u for your comment:)
i just looked at your portfolio and you have some really nice stuff over there

update for the pantomimist:

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[unhaimlish]

just started a model from zsphere based on Bobby Chiu concept http://digital-bobert.cgsociety.org/gallery/348466/

im not sure about the proportion and somthing just not seems right for my opinion but i just cant point my finger on what it is so if anyone know what i’m talking about and can help me i’ll really appreciate it.

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[unhaimlish]

some new wip on a model i’v been working on…
C&C r welcome

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[unhaimlish]

zsphere model iv been working on base on a reference photos i found on the web
try 2 sculpt it frederik storm style:)
hope u like it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qhsxo7vY8ac

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[unhaimlish]

hello guys, along time since i publish any new work over here so this is my new W.I.P
named baraka
hope u like it…

[Tyrone70]

This stuff is pretty interesting.

[AjdinBarucija]

This is really nice work I love it =) If you dont mind the crit. Anatomy needs more work, be it any creature or character there should be a strong foundation in anatomy. Zbrush brush strokes could be more defined and accurate also.
Yourmaking great progress keep up the amazing work =)

[ljabli]

nice work !

[unhaimlish]

ljabli:thank u for your comment
i was looking at your site and i must say that i wish i had the ability of modeling car and hardsurface like u do!!
its really awesome

AjdinBarucija:thank u for your crit i need it and its helps me alot(sorry for my english)
im still trying to learn the anatomic part and its really difficult:o
by the way i reallt love your work!! u have some amazing stuff in your site

Tsayrone70:thank u for your comment

[unhaimlish]

new pose and adding some stuff;)

[gingerrichd]

Some nice work here with an interesting look. I like what youve done with the latests chest, abs and deltoid area. Legs are too straight for my liking. Get some “s” curves into the shin area. Try working the calves into the hamstrings more, theyre a bit sperated at the moment.

[EricShawn]

This is really a great thread, I just love your art. 5 stars.

[unhaimlish]

baraka WIP progress
iv being working on the face and adding some detail on the body
hope u like it

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[unhaimlish]

start a little research on how i want the face 2 look
polypaint and adding some details

hope u like it