Hi Scote,
Thanks for your feedback. I agree with some things, but overall I think your liquified version lost most of the likeness, in my opinion. I think you’ve also made her a man. Regarding the smaller head, her head is kind of large though, but maybe it needs to be a bit smaller:
In the Zbrush view, the head is tilted slightly backwards, which maybe makes it look like the mouth needs to be moved in, here’s a rotated verision:
Not sure about what you’ve done to her nose, I’m struggling to see what you see, but don’t understand either view, perhaps I’m wrong.
Here’s the image I looked at the most as reference:
Thanks for taking the time, I’m going to look into the things I agree with!