Good structure,the detail and the focus shoes just how you like it and it shoes skill most people look for just a thin design wich is being used up and becomeing trivial good stuff.
Nice to see some chunk every once in a while. And I agree that the breasts would be better if they hung a bit more naturally.
@ Framedworld & blomstergutt - Yeah, about her face, I’m working on it atm. Don’t know exactly what I was thinking - **** happens!
@ Ardox - Thx, man. Would have never thought that so many people actually liked her proportions.
@ HiPi - Hope I won’t dissapoint you.
@ Mouthrax - Or a WW2 bomber could be painted somewhere on her …
@ Karthik.AL - Thx, dude.
@ Shockblade - Thx for the great feedback.
@ Scrybe - Thx, man. Gonna rework her breasts. Majority has decided (was close though)!!
Here’s a small before/after comparison of her face. I’m still not finished with it but I think to go into the right direction. Any crits are welcome …
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The face update is great, perfect for your pin-up, very 40s-50s European curved and sexy…shades of Ava Gardner and Gina Lollobrigida.
the pose is worthy of Vargas hijmself, and do someting funky like putting her on a magazine clip or B52 c0ckpit…
Gonna be awesome dude, look forward to seeing it finished! small_orange_diamond
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@ RawSunlight - Wow! Thx for the great feedback.
Quick Update:
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Nice update man!
Great work on clothes!
Awesome work so far man…Love the anatomy and what ur doing with the clothes…I do like the changes in the face but I still think it should be addressed more…The rest of your sculpt is shaping so beautifully and if the face comes together I’m thinking top row…Right now it’s a little ambiguous to me. Bringing in more feminine components would help for sure…u know, thin up the top lip a bit and perhaps slim down the neck…Women usually have pretty small necks circumference wise…looking good though!
Awesome update, she’s looking great. The first thing that catches my eye is her right leg. With the big toe up, it feels like the pose needs that leg to be fully straight like she’s stretching it. But it looks like she still has some slight bend at the knee. It would be a very subtle adjustment, but I think it would help a lot considering.
Anyway, just my 2c, but she’s looking fantastic regardless. Looking forward to more.
Really nice cloth…cant wait to see the final
Just amazing detailing! The shirt,helmet and glasses makes it perfect!
@ grassetti - Grazie! It wasn’t as hard to sculpt clothing as I thought to be in first place. Thx to my roomey who was so kind to pose for me : )
@ sleepfight - Thanks for the tips. Really appreciate it. I’m constantly working on her face 'til I am there. Well toprow on ZBrushCentral would be like a dream come true …
@ sheaspina - Ahh, totally forgot to correct that. Thx, for the hint. Will be straightened out a bit more with my next update.
@ jjvdb15 - Thx for the comment. Still not final but very soon …
@ LMMagnusson - Wow, glad you like it : ))
Still have to sculpt one last Sub-D level on her body, some texturing and hair - yuck! Shading’s not final neither.
Hope you guys like the new update …
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Oughta be done somewhen this week. Dag, I need vacation!
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Hell yeah Looks awesome! Looking forward to see more
awesome stuff. really really like this one
great thread, cant waito to see the end product
hey man I hope you don’t mind, i did a paintover.
i think u have a cool idea here and i think the sculpt is getting pretty good. I like the body and i think the body is heading in a good direction.
So some changes to the face:
smaller eyes, wider nose, brought in the cheeks
i made everything smoother, less of a scrunchy facial position
i blended the upper eyelid to the brow making it more pillowy
added a lower eyelid
moved the jaw down a touch
and added a somewhat sexy half opened mouth thing, iono
for the body, i like the powerful legs and big ass. I think contrasting that with a smaller rib cage/torso could enunciate the pinup idea.
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hope i helped man, good job. keep it up
If your going for an authentic Pin-Up Girl look, remember that fake Plastic Surgeon created lips did not come to be popular until after 1990. There are so many with fake lips in the media now, I think people are forgetting what the lips of genuinely beautiful woman look like.
Great work on the body. I’m sick of pencil thin women with eating disorders or women who want to look like male body builders.
The work of Vargas would make great references.
I was looking forward to the 40’s style hair, but nice work on the helmet…your cloth work is ridiculous!!!
can’t wait to see updates!
@ ishii & 3xtigy - Thx for the feedback
@ michael milano - Well, I’m done. Hope you still like it
@ truedeja - I totally don’t mind cause of the paint-over, infact I really appreciate your time and effort. As I mentioned earlier I was constantly changing bits and parts of the face. Though now I consider it as being finished.
@ Blaine91555 - Ohh yeah. Vargas’ one of the best!
@ d100763 - At the very beginning I do wanted to go with the 40’s hairstyle, but then I liked the idea of the military look and how she plays with it. Plus, the Lucky Strike Package goes so well with the army look. Glad you still like it.
@all - Thx for the helpful critics and feedback. Are still welcome.
Special thanks to Predo for the base mesh, to Dietmar Hollenstein and his endless crits and advice, and to Nathalia Cruz.
Now it’s time for my vacation … Cya, Guys!
And finally a warning - and I say this in good heart.
If you have never ever smoked - then never ever start.
If you think that it’s cool to smoke then just try stopping it.
You’ll find it’s easier not to start, than smoking is to quit.
Edit: Just realized that the images didn’t upload at first. And I haven’t been able to do so with Firefox (know how to, did it before). Anyways, made an upload with the good ol’ Internet Explorer.
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That has come out looking excellent, you have done a great job.
Dude - you have the cloth down - that jacket is about the best I’ve seen - excellent pose and form…
Great work!